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May 21, 2009

Fragments. Good. In your script. #screenwriting

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Fragments good. Isolating words creates a mental close-up  for reader.  It can also add emphasis when needed.  Something like . . . .

 
Terrible GRINDING noise.  Metal on metal.  Decker KICKS open the door and steps in to see a

Meat Grinder.

Churning.  Almost coming apart.  Bad place for flesh and bone.

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